The words we use should full a Persons
Watch your words and do not under estimate the power of none
It was and there were. Yup I’m going there. Everyone does it. I am aware that I have. Starting a sentence with “It was” or “There were” is passive and… boring. Chances are if I’ve stuck them in I’ve crippled the creativity of what could have been said. These should be avoided for obvious reasons they can leave the reader wondering what exactly I meant by ‘it’ or ‘there’.
That can be a problem because if the reader gets bored then they aren’t paying attention. These two sentence starters are often found clinging to cliché phrases that should never be used such as “it was a dark and stormy night.” Blech, it’s been done to death.
So what would make “It was a dark and stormy night.” Better? A better immersive description. Let’s see…
Darkness gave way to the flash that lit up the rivulets…
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